What say you today, little Chipping Sparrow?
Gone are the winter winds that chill to the marrow.
Do you take vigor from Spring’s rebirth,
As blossoms and sunshine caress the Earth?
What a wonderful, wonderful poem. It has a nice, easy, un-forced rhyme, is filled with evocative imagery, and, best of all, is imbued with the spirit of spring. It is truly lovely. I read it twice silently and once aloud. The words flow beautifully.
Sounds lovely! xx
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I was-what sweet times. My treasures!
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just beautiful!
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thank you sweet friend-haven’t written a poem in a long while.
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Okay……where is the love button????? I went for the like button but I really love this.
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Oh thank goodness-I havent written a poem in a while! you are so sweet and such an encourager!! Thank you!
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Delightful!!! 😀 ❤
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thank you! It is a delightful time to write about!
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❤
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This is such a delight, and so refreshing in this time of texts and tweets. I love the rhyme and the rhythm — very, very nice!
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how kind of you-and i agree about modern communication-that is what prompted my poem!
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Wonderful – such a nice poem. 🙂
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thank you Peggy Joan who captures beauty for all of us!
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So beautiful xx
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Aah, beautiful!
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you are the sweet paperpuff always! thank you
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Magical.
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thank you-love that word. So kind of you as always. xx
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Beautiful poem! And I liked the phrase “wakes up all the earth.”
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thank you Ann.
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Just lovely.
Here’s a reply for you:
What say you today, little Chipping Sparrow?
Gone are the winter winds that chill to the marrow.
Do you take vigor from Spring’s rebirth,
As blossoms and sunshine caress the Earth?
Seek spring,
Paz
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maybe the most beautiful comment ever-thank you. Did you write this?
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Oh my goodness! That’s so kind.
Yes, it is an original composition.
Thank you so much!
Paz
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What a wonderful, wonderful poem. It has a nice, easy, un-forced rhyme, is filled with evocative imagery, and, best of all, is imbued with the spirit of spring. It is truly lovely. I read it twice silently and once aloud. The words flow beautifully.
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oh what a sweet comment-Thank you for your dependable loving words. xoxo
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